The Unpublishable

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Oct 26, 2012 5:10 pm

nothing much to say about that one there o.O
did read it, interesting idea.

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 1:18 pm

Hallowe'en didn't come on a Friday, but we've got an Unpublishable for you anyway. Find out what makes a vampire with "Legacy of the Vein." http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... -vein.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 2:52 pm

That . . was horrible . . BADUM BUM TISH!
Well done Mr.Derie.

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:27 pm

I gotta admit: the last one was inspired by the question "What if Walter White was a vampire?"

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:54 pm

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 5:55 pm

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walter_Whi ... aking_Bad)

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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Morbius,_t ... ng_Vampire

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 02, 2012 6:26 pm

Oooh . . MORBIUS THE LIVING VAMPIRE!
THAT ONE I KNOW *-*

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 09, 2012 9:13 pm

The price of memory is courage and blood today on The Unpublishable: Scarbearer http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... earer.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:19 pm

Does not compute?
Input?

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:22 pm

A very stripped down approach to portray something like sin-eating.

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 09, 2012 10:24 pm

i am not faimiliar with the concept of sin-eating . .
i could have understood somebody wanting to be remembered, but being remembered because of the scars of somebody else, who may die or get the scars ruined in another way?

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:40 pm

Are we not all the sum of our smallest sins? Think on this as you read "The Ten Million Demons" on The Unpublishable: http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... emons.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:40 am

That one is very well written, only one error sprung out at me . . wroth instead of wrath, if that was not intended . .
I feel there is a kind of moral in here somewhere, but i can only make out"bigger is not always better, quantity will trump quality over time every time"

and i did not understand what the swings had to do with anything, aside from some, in my opinion, not needed exposition . . i think it hurt the flow of the story more than it helped explain the basic premises O.o

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:52 am

I'm not sure it works, and I'm not sure it doesn't work, but I had to write something because the planned piece for this week was...truly unpublishable, at least in its current form.

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 23, 2012 4:26 pm

Look up into the sky and wonder with me on The Unpublishable, with "Stars Threw Down." http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... -down.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Nov 23, 2012 7:41 pm

ok, next write a story with the self explanatory title of "Stars Threw Up." O.o

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 23, 2012 7:59 pm

When the stars threw down their spears,
And watered heaven with their tears,
Did he smile his work to see?
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Nov 30, 2012 11:02 pm

What does a letter say of Lovecraft? Find out in "From Ech-Pi-El to Ar-I-Ech", only on The Unpublishable: http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... i-ech.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Sat Dec 01, 2012 7:42 pm

i have no knowledge about lovecraft whatsoever so: did you write that or did you type it off of some letter?

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:05 pm

I flipped coins at random to select sentences from Lovecraft's correspondence - each sentence in that letter, right down to the header and footer, are from his letters - and then arranged them. So the only thing I wrote myself was the introduction; the rest is a result of a random composition. It was a bit of an experiment.

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Sat Dec 01, 2012 8:50 pm

ah, so this is one of the cases where the answer to an or question could, indeed, have been claimed to be correct if it had been yes.
intresting experiment, i will say

Korgan0 · Post by **Korgan0** » Sat Dec 01, 2012 10:21 pm

Not only are you a fantastic writer, but I'm impressed that you can keep churning this stuff out, week after week.

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Sat Dec 01, 2012 11:19 pm

Danke. I find it gets easier to keep a schedule as you get into it.

Ancient History · Post by **Ancient History** » Fri Dec 07, 2012 12:54 pm

Sweet, sappy, and a little sinister; two women share everything except what they can't on "Lies Between Us," only on the Unpublishable: http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2012/1 ... en-us.html

Stahlseele · Post by **Stahlseele** » Fri Dec 07, 2012 5:55 pm

Sweet and Sappy Mercenaries or somethin O.o